Out that door she ran
from fear....
Into the dark she
went.
Stumbling along the narrow path
above the cliffs.
Her heart beating faster...
as she made her escape.
The dogs barked
as their master sent
them on their way.
Crashing through the
bushes...
Their howls grew closer still.
Blindly running on...
Hearing the yells in the background.
Now she has nowhere to
go...
They circle around her,
teeth showing.
Stepping back she
losing her balance...
into the sea below
she plunged.
Screaming in terror
as she faces her fate.
They find her
hours later...
amongst the sharp rocks,
the waves of the sea
splashing against her
cold limp body.
 | The story is not a long one, but has been finished, so all those wanting to read it please message me and let me know. by dearestdaffodil 20/08/12 (11:41) (report this comment) |
| I have made a start on the story and it is coming along nicely, but I must warn that this story is not a happy one mind you ,as you can tell from the poem above it does not have a happy ending. by dearestdaffodil 20/08/12 (9:42) (report this comment) |
 | Stunning imagery, please do write the story, I'd love to read it too :) DGD by datguydere 19/08/12 (1:38) (report this comment) |
.jpg) | I love the imagery here, very noire feeling to it, especially the ending. The whole thing played in black and white in my mind as I read. :) by mycall 19/08/12 (1:35) (report this comment) |
 | love it dearest.... i was running with her then phew.. whats next please xxxx by dotty61 18/08/12 (23:57) (report this comment) |
| I've taken the bull by the horns and am starting the story to go with this poem.
by dearestdaffodil 18/08/12 (20:46) (report this comment) |
 | vivid imagery ....leaves you craving the rest of the story by Pelequin 18/08/12 (17:55) (report this comment) |
 | Another great read d.d, i agree with mike has the foundations for a great story, let me know if you write it :D xxxxxxx by kaz31 18/08/12 (16:57) (report this comment) |
| Mike if I get round to writing it you'll be the first to know.
Thanks. by dearestdaffodil 18/08/12 (16:46) (report this comment) |
 | This is a part of a great story, now I want to read the rest of it!!!! Mike by mike green 18/08/12 (16:34) (report this comment) |
 | So very sad..it is really moving pity she had to meet her fate like that!anyways no one escapes their fate! by Maverick 18/08/12 (15:22) (report this comment) |
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