If I knew back then what I know now
Would i have done things differently?
Would the fates allow?
Is our life path set in stone?
Or is the fate we make our own
Id like to think that everything I have been through Has led me to this place
And the mistakes I have made
Was the fate I was unable to evade
So I feel in the stars its set
From the day we are born
Our loves our regrets
Surely that’s the way it is.
Written in the stars
|Dont know if its fate, some say its our gardian angels putting us on the right path through life(check an earlier poem ive wrote called angels-it to is going in what lies beneath).
Great poem lovely words, well done xxxxx|
13/08/12 (12:55) (report this comment)
|Simply beautiful. Well done. Mike|
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12/08/12 (10:01) (report this comment)
|thank you all i really like this one too x|
11/08/12 (21:42) (report this comment)
|Thank u Sarah very much. It has made me happy that u liked it and it is in a book in September called ''What Lies Within'' and not Aspests of love as i got it confused lol. I will look out for more of ur work. xx|
11/08/12 (21:16) (report this comment)
|Interesting work and its good to work through your feelings in poetry. Maybe your new to the pen. I can only wish you joy to it. You can open up a whole world in this art ...John|
11/08/12 (21:15) (report this comment)
|nice flow feels nice to read if that makes sense :)|
11/08/12 (21:08) (report this comment)
|Your welcome. It is also very healthy for the mind too i am new on here as well and i do read your and even have one of urs as fav. I hope u would read one of mine called Beautiful Smile as Forward poetry really loves it. Thank u x.|
11/08/12 (19:41) (report this comment)
|thank you x pretty new to poetry always love to read but never been much of a writer but i feel the more i write the more i want to write its a great way of expressing my feelings and thoughts love it x|
11/08/12 (19:35) (report this comment)
|That is beautiful Sarah and very well done. x|
11/08/12 (19:31) (report this comment)
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