sarahfarrow1@hotmail.com (115 )

Written In The Stars

If I knew back then what I know now

Would i have done things differently?

Would the fates allow?

Is our life path set in stone?

Or is the fate we make our own

Id like to think that everything I have been through Has led me to this place

And the mistakes I have made

Was the fate I was unable to evade

So I feel in the stars its set

From the day we are born

Our loves our regrets

Surely that’s the way it is.

Written in the stars

Posted 11/08/12 (19:22)

COMMENTS (9)

	Dont know if its fate, some say its our gardian angels putting us on the right path through life(check an earlier poem ive wrote called angels-it to is going in what lies beneath). Great poem lovely words, well done xxxxx by kaz31 13/08/12 (12:55) (report this comment)
	Simply beautiful. Well done. Mike by mike green 12/08/12 (10:01) (report this comment)
	thank you all i really like this one too x by sarahfarrow1@hotmail.com 11/08/12 (21:42) (report this comment)
	Thank u Sarah very much. It has made me happy that u liked it and it is in a book in September called ''What Lies Within'' and not Aspests of love as i got it confused lol. I will look out for more of ur work. xx by blackandwhite 11/08/12 (21:16) (report this comment)
	Interesting work and its good to work through your feelings in poetry. Maybe your new to the pen. I can only wish you joy to it. You can open up a whole world in this art ...John by Dalton 11/08/12 (21:15) (report this comment)
	nice flow feels nice to read if that makes sense :) by Pelequin 11/08/12 (21:08) (report this comment)
	Your welcome. It is also very healthy for the mind too i am new on here as well and i do read your and even have one of urs as fav. I hope u would read one of mine called Beautiful Smile as Forward poetry really loves it. Thank u x. by blackandwhite 11/08/12 (19:41) (report this comment)
	thank you x pretty new to poetry always love to read but never been much of a writer but i feel the more i write the more i want to write its a great way of expressing my feelings and thoughts love it x by sarahfarrow1@hotmail.com 11/08/12 (19:35) (report this comment)
	That is beautiful Sarah and very well done. x by blackandwhite 11/08/12 (19:31) (report this comment)

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