niareb1 (19 )

Bluebird Beautiful

I'm staring out the window,

when to my surprise a bluebird's staring back.

He hops and twitch's and darts away,

like a fish to water.

It's a speck when I realise how beautiful a world can be.

Posted 21/06/12 (11:36)

COMMENTS (7)

	I hope so too! This website has given me so much inspiration already! I'm looking forward to the future! by niareb1 21/06/12 (13:36) (report this comment)
	Bravo bravo, Mike has said it all and I second that...read other people's work..not because it will be the same or better than yours but because it will inspire you! I have tried so many different styles since being on this website and it has been due to the versatility and imagination of others.If this is your first poem then I applaud you niarebi..it is beautiful hope we will be friends x Elaine by Leslaine 65 21/06/12 (13:09) (report this comment)
	I've always enjoyed writing and I'd like people to share it with. People who are honest with me. So thank you for your comments. I will most certainly take them on board:D by niareb1 21/06/12 (11:56) (report this comment)
	like the imagery, i go on day coach trips and the countryside is so beautiful and it takes me away from the grimmer sides of Britain/life by middle eye vision 21/06/12 (11:53) (report this comment)
	Welcome Niareb1, i agree with Mike, write what you feel-if it feels right no matter how long or how short,send it in. People will give their honest oppinion's. Good start xxxx by kaz31 21/06/12 (11:51) (report this comment)
	write more, write often, write from your heart, write to please yourself first and last, accept that not everything will be great but it will always be you. MIKE by mike green 21/06/12 (11:43) (report this comment)
	This is my first poem. I entered this website to get support and suggestions to help me improve my work. So please comment with your thoughts and suggestions to improve. Thankyou :) by niareb1 21/06/12 (11:37) (report this comment)

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