I'm staring out the window,
when to my surprise a bluebird's staring back.
He hops and twitch's and darts away,
like a fish to water.
It's a speck when I realise how beautiful a world can be.
|I hope so too! This website has given me so much inspiration already! I'm looking forward to the future!|
21/06/12 (13:36) (report this comment)
|Bravo bravo, Mike has said it all and I second that...read other people's work..not because it will be the same or better than yours but because it will inspire you! I have tried so many different styles since being on this website and it has been due to the versatility and imagination of others.If this is your first poem then I applaud you niarebi..it is beautiful hope we will be friends x Elaine|
by Leslaine 65
21/06/12 (13:09) (report this comment)
|I've always enjoyed writing and I'd like people to share it with. People who are honest with me. So thank you for your comments. I will most certainly take them on board:D|
21/06/12 (11:56) (report this comment)
|like the imagery, i go on day coach trips and the countryside is so beautiful and it takes me away from the grimmer sides of Britain/life|
by middle eye vision
21/06/12 (11:53) (report this comment)
|Welcome Niareb1, i agree with Mike, write what you feel-if it feels right no matter how long or how short,send it in.
People will give their honest oppinion's.
Good start xxxx|
21/06/12 (11:51) (report this comment)
|write more, write often, write from your heart, write to please yourself first and last, accept that not everything will be great but it will always be you. MIKE|
by mike green
21/06/12 (11:43) (report this comment)
|This is my first poem. I entered this website to get support and suggestions to help me improve my work. So please comment with your thoughts and suggestions to improve. Thankyou :)|
21/06/12 (11:37) (report this comment)
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